Calling Home

Well I am not sure how we are supposed to do this but I will do it the best way I know of doing,
Remembrance: Calling Home by Jean Brandt
1. I feel it is a well told story because it is a complete and detailed essay. it is well-rounded and it somewhat interesting in its way of describing.
2. I enjoyed that fact that there was dialogue, but to me there was too much dialogue and it was a little irritating in my opinion; I feel that with a little less dialogue It would have still been a good story.
3. It does state the significance of the memory but i did not like the fact that after she state the significance of the memory, she ends the story.